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Jan. 1st, 2020 12:00 amHow's My Driving
Please comment here with questions, comments, and concerns regarding the way I portray Elsa.
Critique is more than welcome, but it is best if offered with examples of what I'm doing wrong and suggestions on how to improve. I may not always agree and/or take the advice, but it will all be noted.
IP logging off, anon allowed. I will screen threads if requested.
Please comment here with questions, comments, and concerns regarding the way I portray Elsa.
Critique is more than welcome, but it is best if offered with examples of what I'm doing wrong and suggestions on how to improve. I may not always agree and/or take the advice, but it will all be noted.
IP logging off, anon allowed. I will screen threads if requested.
Second Freeze | voice
Mar. 22nd, 2014 10:52 amSo. [She's quiet, a little unsure. Because this is kind of embarrassing. Okay, it's really embarrassing.] I--
I owe several people an apology. While I was a little aware of what these journals could do, I was not under the impression that they could convey the spoken word. So I was rather rude and failed to respond to several people who were only trying to be helpful.
I hope you will accept this apology.
[It's still weird, thinking that people can hear her, but... It's kind of nice. She can talk to them without actually having to be near them.
It's much safer, and it sets her at ease.]
I've finally learned how to use the teleporters some people mentioned. Thank you, Ikki, for telling me what they looked like.
[It took a little time, but she managed to understand how they worked and then to find her way back to the castle she's created -- nothing quite as grand as what she did on the North Mountain, but it can still be seen from the right angle in the mountains.
Between two peaks, hidden from direct sight of the bathhouse by another mountain. Though it's fairly close to the hot springs, now that she knows where it is.]
I'm learning about different kinds of food that don't require cooking. I'm afraid where I'm from, all my meals were made for me, so I never learned.
I suppose I should look into learning. There's a library here, isn't there? Are there books that could help me?
I owe several people an apology. While I was a little aware of what these journals could do, I was not under the impression that they could convey the spoken word. So I was rather rude and failed to respond to several people who were only trying to be helpful.
I hope you will accept this apology.
[It's still weird, thinking that people can hear her, but... It's kind of nice. She can talk to them without actually having to be near them.
It's much safer, and it sets her at ease.]
I've finally learned how to use the teleporters some people mentioned. Thank you, Ikki, for telling me what they looked like.
[It took a little time, but she managed to understand how they worked and then to find her way back to the castle she's created -- nothing quite as grand as what she did on the North Mountain, but it can still be seen from the right angle in the mountains.
Between two peaks, hidden from direct sight of the bathhouse by another mountain. Though it's fairly close to the hot springs, now that she knows where it is.]
I'm learning about different kinds of food that don't require cooking. I'm afraid where I'm from, all my meals were made for me, so I never learned.
I suppose I should look into learning. There's a library here, isn't there? Are there books that could help me?
First Freeze | written
Mar. 10th, 2014 09:15 pm[The words come with a great amount of care, the writing well taught and clear.]
Does this book really allow others to read this? That seems so remarkable. I suppose if it doesn't, there's still no harm in writing this.
I've read the guide here and think I understand. Which isn't to say I'm entirely happy with this situation, but I suppose there are worse things that could have happened than finding myself in a place like this.
[She could have been dragged back to Arendelle. Or hurt someone. Here, they're free of her, and she's safe from being bothered.]
My name is Elsa.
[...That much will do. She doesn't want to be known for who she was or what she is. A name is enough.]
I've been here for almost a day now, and, I admit, I'm getting a little hungry. Is there somewhere I can go for something to eat? All I see are mountains around me.
The journal mentioned a village, but I don't know where it is. I would be grateful for any assistance with directions. Thank you very much.
-- Elsa
Does this book really allow others to read this? That seems so remarkable. I suppose if it doesn't, there's still no harm in writing this.
I've read the guide here and think I understand. Which isn't to say I'm entirely happy with this situation, but I suppose there are worse things that could have happened than finding myself in a place like this.
[She could have been dragged back to Arendelle. Or hurt someone. Here, they're free of her, and she's safe from being bothered.]
My name is Elsa.
[...That much will do. She doesn't want to be known for who she was or what she is. A name is enough.]
I've been here for almost a day now, and, I admit, I'm getting a little hungry. Is there somewhere I can go for something to eat? All I see are mountains around me.
The journal mentioned a village, but I don't know where it is. I would be grateful for any assistance with directions. Thank you very much.
-- Elsa